Dawning Dusk

The setting sun spread its burning rays
(Now) Relief breathed as another day ends.
I craned up my neck to gaze outside
But the half-closed window shut the light;
Only solitude silently was gushed in.
As the hot breeze blew through the blinds, thin
I heard only a crow crack out;
Waiting to hear a noiseless sound.
Not a car, not a bus passed
Was it only the truth I yearned?
I will wait and eternally wait
Only a sigh comes out -- No escape!
By--
J

2 comments:

Unknown said...

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Tridib Roy said...

Good poetic sense and rythm. Try out some more. Perhaps this is influenced by Wordswoth style.
Babun